Music Video Draft 2

Above shows a draft of our music video and the progress we have made since the halfway evaluation. Since this time, we have had a reshoot incorporating significant props (balloons) within the video to ensure synergy is noticeable throughout the video in conjunction with our promotional work; digipak, poster, magazine. We have also edited a lot of the footage to make it look more crisp and ensured that all of our lip syncing is in time with the music. We still have a lot of progress to make, however we are making a lot of improvement every day. 

We have also received feedback from our teacher when she watched this video, she suggested:

•  We need to sort out the contrast and brightness with the majority of the shots to ensure they are all equal.
• We need to test out different ways to merge the split screen together (near the end of the video) to make us look less segregated when Renae is singing "sticks and stones".
• We need to go over all of our cuts between each shot to see if we can match them up more significantly with the beat of the song. 
• We need to cut out bits of video where the camera jitters EG pip on the tractor. 
• Remove the footage of pip walking away from the camera. (2:01)
• Rearrange some of the single shots so that the same person isnt next to eachother after each cut. EG pip walking on the logs and pip in the corn field (1:47)