Music video Draft 3

Since the last draft we had spaces nearer the end of the music video that hadn't been filled with footage therefore we added in more shots of the three of us. As this is the third draft we were able to show the development of the video and how precise the shots have become. From the feedback of our  evaluation we were told that we should re-shoot to include a larger variety of shots - so we chose to go back to Hylands and shoot more add in shots to add to the end and throughout the video.

Looking back on it we have many things that need to be tweaked and edited to make it look more professional. These include:

• There is a tractor shot where the camera jumps - it makes it look unprofessional and ruins the shot (1:21)
• The frame of the shot is wrong as it doesn't fit in with the youtube frame or match any of the industry standards
• At the start of the music video the lip syncing is just out of time (the first minute) as it is slightly out it makes us look as though it isn't us that are singing
• at this point we still hadn't applied and editing so that is also a must to make our music video improve - contrast, brighten etc 
• The shots are too different in brightness - (2:18) - between Sophie and Pip, Pip is really bright and colourful and Sophie is dark and cloudy. This contrast doesn't fit well together therefore we need to edit sophist shot to s brighter scene or change the shots so they rant shown next to each other.